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Killer Headline -- Italian example

The Exact Formula I Use to Create Killer Headlines

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Killer Headline -- Italian example

Killer headlines are created, not just some output from an AI prompt.

Because your ingenuity is NOT something you outsource to some mindless data pool to throw words together. You are still irreplaceable, no matter what anyone says.

“Those who tell the best stories, win.” Seen on the Web

“Make a bold mark. Not a dull impression.” The Internet

Emails. Texts. Video ads. TV commercials. Billboards. “Alerts” on our smartphones (i.e., reminders, calendar events, beacon notifications, push notifications, et al). It’s endless.

Some estimate well over 3,000+ media messages pummel each of us every day, 7 days a week.

Yet too many brands allow their words and ideas to get lost, treating any else as “cosmetic dressing” to their precious words.

“On average, five times as many people read the headline as read the body copy. When you have written your headline, you have spent eighty cents out of your dollar.” David Ogilvy

We all know the power of movies. Those started as a script, words on a page (some as books). Yet the cinematic version reaches way more people and is often (if well done) more quoted than the book itself.

And then there’s lyrics. Alone, they have a fraction of the impact without the melody that sets the tone and engages the listener.

So, what if words could be transformed to deliver the message before a person reads a single syllable?

How do we make the words themselves speak volumes beyond their meaning?

I answer this with a simple, proven formula at the end of this article.

Helping Ideas Speak Volumes

I’ve always been fascinated with words, and how design could transform their meaning and elevate the words beyond the usual.

Early in my career, I discovered this with the logo I designed for the New York City Ballet:

New York City Ballet's Killer Headline and Logo

More recently, I explored adding more meaning to words using motion in a short video entitled “Helping Words Speak for Themselves.”

I started to rediscover this even more when working with Mega Co-op on its rebrand. With 82,000 members, their communications needed to have impact. They needed to engage the shopper. They needed to go from informative to irresistible.

The “pasta” display above was one example, but the first breakthrough started when we had a Summer seasonal campaign to develop. The outcome told the whole story:

The Summer Killer headline

After that, I realized I had to convert words into messengers of visual impact.

Called Killer Headlines Because They Kill Indifference

Killer headlines. Called that because they melt away any and all indifference and resistance.

The ones that grab the reader by the throat and keep them glued to the screen.

The type of headlines that transform everyday readers into insatiable teenagers whose hormones have taken over.

How do you prevent your ideas from getting lost in the sea of noise already bombarding your target?

There are tons of articles that talk about the different “formulas” for writing headlines, the “tricks of the trade,” the numbered lists, and all that.

We’ve all read them or heard of them.

But as I hinted above, I am speaking of all communications, way beyond headlines.

But why write more about it when I can show you?

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Initially, designed for a Slideshare presentation on how to market food, this also became a piece for the Mega Co-op:

Killer Headlines Speak Volumes and Kill Indifference by David Brier

As part of the rebrand and grand unveiling, these formed part of the signage system and Mega’s Brand Vocabulary:

Killer Headlines Speak Volumes and Kill Indifference by David Brier
Killer Headlines Speak Volumes and Kill Indifference by David Brier

As you can see, the keywords were formed out of aspects that amplified the meaning. In the case of the Soup & Salad, I used leafy nature and leaves, gorgeously illustrated to convey natural and freshness. In the case of the pizza, negative space was used to expose the board upon which the pizza was being made.

During this time, I began further experimenting with how letters and food could form a recipe for telling more stories and conveying ideas with more impact:

Killer Headlines Speak Volumes and Kill Indifference by David Brier
Killer Headlines Speak Volumes and Kill Indifference by David Brier
Killer Headlines Speak Volumes and Kill Indifference by David Brier

In each case, elements from the food item inspired another way to tell the story: the ice cream cone, the egg yolks and the dill used in the pickling process.

In light of the end of the year, this design added some much-needed spice to the holiday spirit:

Killer Headlines Speak Volumes and Kill Indifference by David Brier

The Mega Co-op had some opportunities that involved my creating letters out of actual food, not just on the digital screen. This first example involved my cutting 5 different cheeses into letters for this advertisement. It is also the most viewed and liked image on my Instagram account with over 740 likes:

Killer Headlines Speak Volumes and Kill Indifference by David Brier
David Brier Instagram

Then, Valentine’s Day came and love was in the air. Again, I had to get my hands dirty with over three different types of “chocolate chip” kisses: chocolate, peanut butter and cinnamon kisses. This shows the ad that resulted along with some detailed shots from the photoshoot:

Killer Headlines Speak Volumes and Kill Indifference by David Brier
Killer Headlines Speak Volumes and Kill Indifference by David Brier
Killer Headlines Speak Volumes and Kill Indifference by David Brier

And then two, two last morsels showed how to transform your words and ideas into so much more:

Killer Headlines Speak Volumes and Kill Indifference by David Brier
Killer Headlines Speak Volumes and Kill Indifference by David Brier

The Unorthodox 4-Step to Creating Killer Headlines

  1. Craft really great words. Do not simply “report the facts.” Instead, export the vision, the story, and the passion and immerse your reader in the world you’ve created. If you can’t (or won’t) do that, you have no business doing the rest.
  2. Ensure your words tell a story. How? Put yourself in your reader’s shoes.
  3. Then create a visual landscape, something that amplifies the story in a new and unexpected way.
  4. Then make the stars of your scene the words themselves, to enhance the emotional impact, differentiate your message, and add a new dimension to your story.

Go ahead.

Give it a shot.

Hell, I even used these same principles to design and write the titles to my bestsellers:

David Brier bestsellers used killer headlines

All you have to lose is a dull message, replacing it with one that immerses your reader in a new sense of wonder, discovery, and engagement.

The worst that could happen is you kill a little (or a lot of) indifference to your message.

Killer Headlines Speak Volumes and Kill Indifference by David Brier
coffee and typography by david brier

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